Well...
It's well written... but why the instrumentation? I'm afraid I couldn't exactly say what would improve it, but the instrument choice makes it sound 10x cheesier than it could have been.
P.S. I love everything else you do.
Well...
It's well written... but why the instrumentation? I'm afraid I couldn't exactly say what would improve it, but the instrument choice makes it sound 10x cheesier than it could have been.
P.S. I love everything else you do.
teh fcukin newgrunds! lol!!!1
Age 37, Male
Student
You tell me
Somewhere in MN...
Joined on 5/10/06